Of Things Broken – Friday Fictioneers, Oct. 25/13

Friday Fictioneers is sponsored by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields.  The idea is to write a 100 word story with a beginning, middle and end based on the photo prompt.

Photo copyright: Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

dismantled keyboard

Of Things Broken

(100 words)

“Archie!”

“Yes, luv.  Is that you just in then?”

“Come here!  What is this piece of shit sitting in the hallway?”

“Now, now luv – ”

“No, I don’t even want to hear it.  You promised.  You agreed to no more junk in this house!”

“It’s not my junk you see luv, it’s -”

“It’s your bloody junk in our bloody house, which makes it our common junk to add to all the other common junk you have stashed in here!”

“It’ll be gone -”

“No, Archie, I’ll be gone.  You won’t hoard me.  I’m done.  I want a divorce.”

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15 thoughts on “Of Things Broken – Friday Fictioneers, Oct. 25/13

  1. “You won’t hoard me.” very strong words. great dialogue. and i couldn’t help but notice the Rocky Horror photo, i loooove that movie 🙂

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